Not too shabby
That was a pretty big collection of short toons. Good for repeated watching...reminds me of disasterlabs.com cartoons like Arfenhouse.
Not too shabby
That was a pretty big collection of short toons. Good for repeated watching...reminds me of disasterlabs.com cartoons like Arfenhouse.
Um
There's a lot of things you can improve here. Good background and stuff and cartooning..but your audio was god-awful! Also, just the whole way the joke was told was poor. It's a funny idea, but badly performed. Pretty good anyways.
LOL!!
OMG the creator of these series is so fricken funny!!! This was great. Your cartoons achieve a variety of things which many others fail to.
LOL!
Damn, that was just taken in a whole other direction. Looked all innocent up to the point of the Elf unzipping his pants, and then especially when he stomped on him. Friggen awesome!!!!
SHIIIT WOW-FUCK!
DUDE! This is so great! I have a whole new outlook on Newgrounds now..something is actually awesome, funny and origanal all at the same time! THANK YOU SO MUCH!!!
Unique
Wow..never seen anything like this before. An entirely different stick fight movie, if you wanna call it that. Crazy animation and such.
Nice
Hey man, I really dig this a lot! I'm not really sure you went about doing it, but it gives me some ideas for my own. One thing that could be better is maybe faster animation & different music. Other than that it's quite inventive! Good job! Check out some of my toons cuz some deal w/symmetry, you might like 'em: http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view.php?id=142699
Hi C360:
Very glad you like it !!
Usually when I get a negative review, I go to look up the people who BLAMMED it and to see where or what their interests are, and if they maybe wrote some music/Flash themselves. Maybe to learn something I didn't know before that would be useful to make my Flash better received in the future.
Well, I can't with Razholio who doesn't have a NG account, looking up TP21, found he liked one Flash so looked for it, was removed by Tom. Said TP wrote music, tried to listen to that, also removed.
So maybe I don't feel so bad for myself now. :)
I looked at your EverChange, very nice !! I also looked to see if you were using any coding, and you weren't.
I know you are very proud of the work you are doing but that is a LOT of work you did ! My Kaleidoscope is all computed. Send me some Email and I'll send you some sample FLAs to play with to show that you don't need to structure the film entirely by yourself but can rely on Flash to compute one for you.
Oh, and Square Kingdom is making good progress ! I decided to take advantage of FLASH's unique ability to multi-task multiple scripts in different layers so this should help in the long run. :)
David
Be original! Make new!
Age 41, Male
Programmer
New England Institute of Art
Brighton, MA
Joined on 12/28/03